I got truly excellent crit on it the first time I posted the very first version, but in my head that beginning was like the first words in a rhyme that I was afraid of forgetting. I think I have some grasp of the story now, though (or it's just run so far away on me that it doesn't matter), and I don't need those struts.
To the person who Said So (though I know you won't see this): thank you, and I'm sorry if you felt I ignored your solid advice.









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-"-"- Owl.
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Battlecruiser Operational
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"Bother," said Pooh, as Piglet came back from the dead.
tänder... oo
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